Saturday, December 5, 2009

The Storm - Chapter One - Part Two

The Storm - Chapter One - Part Two

1 comment:

  1. I loved your story Julie. Granted it needs editing in terms of structure, spelling and punctuation, but no book gets published without a good editor, so that concern is minor. The story is engaging, suspenseful and totally charming. Reminds of books like Watership Down and the Wind in the Willows. You have talent and imagination and great sense of ambiance. Keep writing. I'll be reading you to my grandchildren one day I'm sure.

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